Black Swan and Star Wars: Cousins of Story Structure

One tells the story of an Earth-bound dancer who dreams of being the very best that ballet has to offer; the other tells the story of a whiny farmboy who leaves his dusty home to fight against an Evil Empire. Two dreamers at far corners of separate galaxies. How exactly can one claim that there is anything remotely similar between the two?

Because both characters are faced with the same problem.

Story Structure and Problem Solving

When one steps back and takes a look at what is really going on within a complete story, the process of problem-solving becomes apparent. A problem is introduced into the life of a Main Character and the efforts that come as a result determine whether or not that problem is ultimately resolved. Everything else that has to do with “structure”–whether it be saving a cat, or entering a special world, or meeting the mentor–is really a superficial construct built on top of the true reality that a story is about the efforts to resolve a problem.

Resolution, however, is not always a positive thing.

Peace of Mind or Emotional Turmoil?

In the concluding episode of Mad Men’s Season One, Don Draper (John Hamm) begins to realize the tragic consequences his actions have had on those he loves. This resolution, or change, comes with his successful pitch to the suits from Kodak:

This device isn’t a spaceship; it’s a time machine. It goes backwards and forwards. It takes us to a place where we ache to go again. It’s not called the wheel. It’s called the carousel. It lets us travel the way a child travels, around and back home again to a place where we know we are loved.

He’s speaking of Kodak’s new gadget, but we know he is really speaking about himself. The problem of his philandering and self-centered approach has been solved, but only with a great emotional cost. Don returns home triumphant–only to find his house empty, his heart denied the usual emotional catharsis that comes when a problem is solved. Combining a change of heart with the crush of emotional turmoil contributes to the honesty and sincerity many point to as strengths of the show’s writing.

This first season of Mad Men is the exception to the rule that change equals happiness. More often than not, the resolution of a Main Character’s problem comes with a greater peace of mind, a release of personal angst. Returning the focus on this article’s titular characters, it is clear to see that both Nina and Luke experience this overwhelming sense of relief with their own personal resolutions.

Validating Oneself

Luke Skywalker gets into trouble because he is always testing himself. Whether it’s in the bar with Tatooine’s ruffians or out in the rocks searching for R2, this drive he has to see how good he measures up is his problem.

Nina Sayers suffers from the same problem. Whether it’s due to the pressures she feels from her mother constantly checking up on her, or her own inner drive to see whether or not she can dance the dance of the Black Swan, Nina’s troubles find their source in this drive to constantly check the validity of a certain belief, in this case, that she can measure up.

Dogfights in space and imaginary dance competitors are the various means with which each film communicates the effects of this problem, but in the end both films are examining the same problem. And because both characters face the same type of problem, they both will find resolution in the same place.

Letting Go

If someone experiences trouble because they are driven to check something out or because someone else tests them, their solution can only come in the form of trust. If you constantly check something and it only makes things worse, the best thing to do is to simply let go and trust that things will work out. In the same way that prevention can solve problems of pursuit (as in The Terminator), trusting something without checking first for validation solves a problem of test. Luke and Nina solve their individual problems precisely this way.

Luke trusts the Force. Nina trusts her body. In both cases, each character lets go and stops looking for validation. And, quite unlike poor old Don above, both Luke and Nina find peace of mind at the end of their journey. They both receive the accolades they once thought were mere fantasies. Sure, Nina’s physical journey came to an end with the closing credits, but that sense of personal angst she struggled with throughout the entire film vanished with that final fall.

The Personal Problems of the Main Character

If this seems too reductive, consider that this is only one part of the story’s real problem, the problem most personal to the Main Character. There are still the other characters in the story to consider who may, or may not–depending on the story’s dynamics–be experiencing a similar curse of validation.

While both Luke and Nina experience the same problem of feeling like an outsider, the problems felt by the rest of their respective casts reside in completely different stratospheres. Black Swan finds its characters engaged in backstabbing and psychological manipulations as they climb up the ladder of New York dance. Star Wars explores the dangers of laser blasts and light saber battles. Can’t quite call them the same story there. This is why the two films are more like cousins rather than blood brothers. There are parts that are dead-on the same, while others sit at polar ends of the dramatic spectrum.

Validation is not the only problem that can beset a Main Character. In addition to the problems of pursuit described above, you can have problems with feelings (Michael in The Godfather), problems with abilities (Harry Potter in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone) and problems with trying to do too much (Remy in Ratatouille). Problems are as varied as the characters who encounter them.

The problem is key to making a story work. Identify the problem facing a Main Character and the corresponding solution that goes with it and the story’s structure begins to reveal itself. Only then can one recognize that the troubles of a farmboy in space come remarkably close to those of an aspiring dancer in New York.

Advanced Story Theory for this Article

Both Nina and Luke face a problem of Test. In addition, they both can be found in the Situation domain (alienated), Concerned with Progress (moving up the ladder of dance as her body slowly transforms into a real swan, growing beyond Tatooine), and face Issues of Fantasy (belief in the Force and fantasies that someone is out to kill her). And, as pointed out above, they both end with a Story Judgment of Good.

But from there, the similarities begin to disappear. The Overall Story for Star Wars resides in Physics, while the OS for Black Swan lies in Psychology. Again, the difference between light saber battles and backstabbing your way to the top.

It is interesting to note too, that because of this relation between the Overall Story and the Main Character, the kind of growth Nina and Luke have to go through before they can change heads in a different direction. Luke’s Growth has to do with Stop–he has to get rid of that chip on his shoulder that he doesn’t measure up. Nina’s Growth is one of Starting something. It’s not so much that she has a chip on her shoulder as it is that she needs to open herself up. Nina’s problem is ahead of her, Luke’s is behind him.

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