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Battle: Los Angeles

Structure: 1/5 | Entertainment: 3/5

Strange to spend a lot of time setting up Aaron Eckhart's grizzled and aging Vet Nantz (even the slowest kid can outrun him) only to completely drop that issue once the fighting starts. Even stranger to insert Michele Rodriguez into the mix--the only woman--and not have her make the argument that your physicality shouldn't matter. It's Michele Rodriguez for Christ's sake, she personifies attitude!

Of course, without her side of the...

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