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              Horrible Bosses

              A fractured structure turns a funny concept into something easily forgettable.

              Incomplete Story

              No Main Character Throughline, no reason to be emotionally invested. A functioning narrative relies on four Throughlines—each representing a different perspective on the story’s core problem:

              You can’t have the last three without the first, and with only 25% of the narrative intact Horrible Bossess quickly loses Audience involvement. The comedic situations—while amusing and entertaining—offer no thematic connection and become a meaningless collection of weak setups and bizarre payoffs.

              Never Trust a Hero

              Subscribe and receive our FREE PDF E-book on why the concept of a "Hero" in story is outdated and holding you back from writing a great story.