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The Nice Guys

High on fun, low on structure--a perfect example of a schizophrenic storymind.

Structure: 1/5 | Entertainment: 4/5

Shane Black's The Nice Guys starts out great--then falters into schizophrenic territory towards the end. Multiple conclusions often tell of broken stories and misguided purpose; storyforms that start, then fade away. For stories to setup the potentials for greater meaning only to eventually ignore or forget them somewhere down the road breaks a tremendous amount of trust between Author and audience.

Here, the fractured narrative...

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