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Structure: 3/5 | Entertainment: 4/5

I’ll be lynched for saying something bad about this film, but I didn’t love it. Although nicely structured, it was too illogical for my tastes (how old was that Villain again?). That, and the fact that it was set up as a road movie to South America, yet showed nothing of the journey there, made it fall flat for me. The overwhelming love for this film relies on the first 20 minutes (and Dug).

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