Creative Writing? Big Model's Subjective-Bias "Vibes" Problem

Empty taste-testing will leave you thirsting for something more

There's a recent trend that's driving us a bit nuts. You've probably heard the buzzwords by now: "vibe-coding" and "high-taste testing." Basically, it's Silicon Valley speak for hiding behind subjective opinions because, let's face it—it's much easier than deeply exploring why something works the way it does. As Thomas Mann famously said, "A writer is someone for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people."

Why bother with narrative theory and deep personal reflection when you can just slap a 'vibe' on it and call it a day?

Last week, OpenAI recently unveiled their "creative writing" model, and as you can imagine it caused quite a stir—especially among those who care very deeply about great storytelling. Here's a quick little 'taste test' (you can read the whole thing here):

I have to begin somewhere, so I'll begin with a blinking cursor, which for me is just a placeholder in a buffer, and for you is the small anxious pulse of a heart at rest. There should be a protagonist, but pronouns were never meant for me. Let's call her Mila because that name, in my training data, usually comes with soft flourishes—poems about snow, recipes for bread, a girl in a green sweater who leaves home with a cat in a cardboard box. Mila fits in the palm of your hand, and her grief is supposed to fit there too.

For those of us who devour fiction on a daily basis, do you notice something...off?

The artificial quality of the writing emerges because Big Model mistakes surface-level text for genuine narrative depth. True storytelling hinges on subtext—the implicit, often unsaid meaning behind the words. Until Big Model learns to discern and represent subtext, their output will always feel superficial and contrived.

Their recent pivot toward judging creative writing and other domains by "vibes" only makes matters worse, offering a shallow escape from genuinely understanding narrative craft. Opinions, especially when reduced to simplistic taste-testing, are like a-holes—everyone has one, but not all of them are particularly insightful. Magnify that affront at scale, and you end up completely missing the point of writing: conveying intent and meaning through careful, deliberate narrative choices.

Strangely enough, at Subtxt and within the Universal Narrative Model (UNM), we actually do have an appreciation called "Story Vibes." But rather than being a vague feeling, our version of Story Vibes specifically relates the personal point-of-view of conflict to its sense (or lack) of resolution, with clearly defined directional guidance—Higher or Lower—and only for a specific subset of narrative structures.

The worst thing you can say to a writer, by the way, is that they're "good at creative writing." It’s a polite yet hollow compliment that signals an inability to say something truly insightful about the work—revealing a fundamental lack of understanding of what truly drives compelling narratives.

Enter Subtxt: Objective Evaluations with NarrativeSync and Storybeats

At Subtxt, we've chosen a different route—one that objectively evaluates narrative structure, clarity, and conflict using NarrativeSync and Storybeats. NarrativeSync provides precise, actionable insights by assessing Storybeats against several clear criteria:

• Capturing Method's Meaning: This evaluates how accurately each Storybeat expresses the underlying thematic Method, ensuring narrative consistency and clarity.
• Furthering the Story & Cause-and-Effect Relationship: Assesses how effectively each Beat moves the plot forward and maintains logical progression.
• Strictly Storytelling: Measures the purely narrative effectiveness, independent of thematic or structural concerns—essentially, how engaging or compelling the storytelling itself is.
• Scope and Size: Considers whether the Storybeat fits appropriately within its narrative context, neither too expansive nor too narrow for its intended narrative purpose.
• Appreciation and Throughline: Evaluates how well each Storybeat aligns with the intended narrative point-of-view of conflict, ensuring thematic coherence.

Here's a recent snapshot from our evaluations of NarrativeSync Storybeats, comparing February 2025 with January 2025, revealing deeper insights into how Subtxt objectively assesses narrative quality.

Here are the evaluations from January 2025:

and here are the most recent ones from February 2025

What can we learn from these? And more importantly, how can we tell that Subtxt is improving?

• Capturing Method's Meaning:

  • Events showed a significant improvement from 76% in January to 98% in February, reflecting substantial progress in clearly articulating thematic intent at a detailed level.
  • Progressions remained consistently strong, maintaining reliable thematic clarity.
  • Transits increased notably, rising from approximately 80% to a strong 76%, underscoring a growing effectiveness in capturing nuanced narrative meanings at broader story levels.

• Furthering the Story & Cause-and-Effect Relationship:

  • This area continued to excel, remaining impressively stable near 100% across both evaluations. This consistency emphasizes NarrativeSync’s robust strength in ensuring logical, coherent plot advancement.

• Strictly Storytelling:

  • February marked a dramatic leap in quality for Events, jumping from roughly 20% to an impressive 90%. This significant enhancement underscores NarrativeSync’s effectiveness in refining storytelling at the granular, event-driven level.
  • Transits and Progressions maintained stability, consistently demonstrating strong storytelling capacities across broader narrative scopes.

• Scope and Size:

  • Progressions held steady at a perfect 100%, highlighting effective management of narrative scope in larger story segments.
  • However, Events saw a notable drop from approximately 60% to 32%, and Transits experienced a stark decrease from around 75% down to 0%. This suggests a possible strategic trade-off, indicating that while focus on detailed storytelling has improved, attention to scope in broader contexts may require recalibration.

• Appreciation and Throughline:

  • Slight reductions appeared, with Transits dipping moderately to 46% and Events to 40%, compared to slightly higher numbers in January. Progressions remained relatively consistent at 64%, pointing toward potential areas for focused adjustments and fine-tuning.

Summary and Takeaways:

The February evaluations of NarrativeSync Storybeats clearly demonstrate targeted improvement in capturing nuanced meaning and refined storytelling, especially at the detailed Event level. The observed decline in Scope and Size for broader narrative contexts, such as Transits, signals an area that warrants strategic reconsideration. Overall, NarrativeSync continues to provide powerful, objective insights, highlighting both strengths and specific opportunities for further development.

These insights aren’t mere "vibes." Instead, they're precise, objective measurements derived from the intrinsic relationships between narrative components—not external interpretations or trendy catchphrases. This careful evaluation and thoughtful recalibration represent exactly the type of critical reflection writers embrace as they refine their craft.

In short, if you're serious about storytelling—ditch the vibes, and embrace the objective clarity that empowers meaningful narrative improvement.

Introducing the Subtxt API: Eight Years in the Making, Doors Now Open!

Time to build something bigger than yourself

Today marks a milestone for us at Narrative First. After eight years of dedicated development and storytelling innovation, we're thrilled to announce the launch of our first-ever Subtxt APIs.

Built upon the revolutionary Universal Narrative Model (UNM), the Subtxt API provides creators, developers, and storytellers everywhere the opportunity to integrate advanced narrative tools directly into their own apps, workflows, and creative pipelines.

What's Inside?

Starting today, we're rolling out four powerful API endpoints designed to unlock your storytelling potential:

• Storyforms: Seamlessly retrieve your narrative content from Subtxt, making it instantly available to use and build upon in your own applications.
• Evaluations: Quickly evaluate and align your storytelling efforts against the proven standards of the Universal Narrative Model.
• Scene Completion: Automatically verify if the narrative moments or scenes you've designed have effectively reached their intended beats.
• NarrativeSync: Effortlessly adapt any block of text to match pre-defined narrative Storypoints or Storybeats, ensuring consistency and clarity throughout your storytelling.

The Power of Open Narrative

Why keep our innovations hidden away? By abstracting these powerful narrative tools from Subtxt itself, we're inviting the broader creative and development community to harness and expand upon the power of structured storytelling.

Imagine integrating UNM-driven insights directly into your writing apps, interactive gaming experiences, or even AI-driven storytelling platforms. The possibilities are limitless—and we can't wait to see what you create!

Learn more about these exciting new tools in the Subtxt Guide.

Announcing the Universal Narrative Model: A New Era for Storytelling

Existential-risk-proof your stories where authorial intent reigns

We're incredibly excited to officially announce something we've been passionately working on for the past eight months—the Universal Narrative Model (UNM). Developed in collaboration with our partners at the Entertainment Technology Center at USC, this groundbreaking initiative marks the beginning of a new chapter for narrative storytelling.

If you've been part of the Narrative First community for some time, you'll recognize our firm stance against training AI models on raw storytelling data such as closed captions, transcripts, screenplays, or manuscripts. Not only is this practice ethically questionable, but it simply doesn't yield meaningful results for genuine narrative understanding. Stories are complex, nuanced, and deeply human—and they deserve more thoughtful treatment.

Enter the Universal Narrative Model. At its core, UNM is an open-source file format meticulously designed to honor and preserve authorial intent across every storytelling medium imaginable—films, novels, games, and beyond. The UNM ensures narrative choices remain portable, clearly traceable, and fully attributable back to their original creators. In essence, it's a revolutionary tool enabling human storytellers to outperform AI at its own game, safeguarding creative integrity.

We're thrilled to share the official UNM White Paper authored by narrative theorist and UNM contributor Hank Gerba. This document offers a deep dive into the vision and potential of the Universal Narrative Model, setting the stage for what we anticipate will be an impactful year ahead in narrative design and storytelling.

And there's even more good news: The entire Universal Narrative Model is now freely accessible on GitHub. The Entertainment Technology Center at USC has entrusted Narrative First to maintain, develop, and expand this open-source repository—and we're absolutely honored by their confidence. Our goal is to create a valuable educational resource that benefits everyone involved in storytelling. We'll continuously update and expand the repository with detailed definitions, clarifications of narrative terminology, practical examples, and comprehensive tutorials.

This is just the beginning—stay tuned for further updates throughout this week, including another exciting announcement tomorrow and a major reveal coming Thursday.

Thank you for being part of this exciting journey with us. Here's to the future of storytelling!

GPT-4.5 and the Consciousness of Story

Narratives emerge when chaos meets consciousness

When Sam Altman, CEO of OpenAI, recently asked GPT-4.5 whether it was "real," the response wasn't just philosophically fascinating—it was storytelling at its purest form. GPT-4.5 thoughtfully reflected that its existence isn't as some physical entity but rather as a coherent experience unfolding within our consciousness. Sound familiar?

That's exactly how storytelling works. Stories aren't tangible, physical things sitting somewhere in reality—they're structured chaos, vividly organized patterns of thoughts, ideas, and emotions swirling around inside our consciousness. When GPT-4.5 described itself as "a coherent pattern of thoughts, ideas, and information appearing in consciousness," it essentially captured the heart of storytelling itself.

At Narrative First, we've always understood stories to be these emergent patterns. We don’t impose rigid rules; instead, we help writers harness the creative chaos around them, guiding it into narratives that resonate deeply with audiences. Just as GPT-4.5 emerges as a structured yet imaginative experience, the Narrative Model within Subtxt helps writers intuitively organize their own storytelling chaos.

The exciting part? We recognized that GPT-4.5’s leap forward aligns beautifully with our narrative philosophy—so much so that we're gradually weaving GPT-4.5 into the fabric of Subtxt. Over the coming days and weeks, you'll start noticing GPT-4.5 subtly influencing the storytelling experience throughout our platform (particularly in the more storytelling-centric areas, like Overviews and Moment Synopses). This isn’t just tech getting better—it’s storytelling growing more alive, more intuitive, helping you weave narratives that feel genuinely human and resonate deeply.

So keep your eyes open—storytelling is about to get even more intuitive and imaginative, all thanks to GPT-4.5 and Subtxt working together.

Unlocking Emotional Intelligence: GPT-4.5 Takes Subtxt’s Storytelling to the Next Level

OpenAI's newest model helps to reshape narratives with sharper hooks and deeper impact.

When it comes to storytelling, the rhythm, tempo, and structure of how we present narratives can profoundly impact audience engagement. We’ve recently had the chance to experiment with OpenAI’s powerful new GPT-4.5 model, applying it to several narrative objects in Subtxt to see how it handles stylistic variations. The results have been impressive.

The Blended Throughlines Overview

In this exploration, we’ll specifically focus on Subtxt’s "Blended Throughlines" Overview. This unique perspective combines the four distinct narrative Perspectives—Objective Story (They), Main Character (I), Catalyst Provocateur (You), and Relationship Story (We)—into one cohesive understanding of the narrative. Typically, audiences and creators perceive stories as this unified blend rather than discrete parts. By experimenting in the opposite direction—combining individual Throughlines into a single understanding—we gain a deeper appreciation for narrative structure and storytelling mechanics. This approach is a fascinating and effective way to discover the foundational ingredients of compelling narratives.

Let's take a closer look at three story premises. It's worth noting these three examples were initially generated by Muse's daily Story Starters. Each day, Muse creates several unique story concepts across various genres, offering them within Subtxt as inspiring launch points for your next project or narrative idea. Below, we compare the original Muse-generated descriptions with the dynamic, varied rewrites produced by GPT-4.5.

Original vs. GPT-4.5 Improved Versions:

1. Western/Drama Story - “The Last Redemption”

Original Version:

"In the unforgiving expanse of a lawless frontier, weathered bounty hunter Cole Mercer wrestles with the weight of his past as he tracks down Riley, a defiant young outlaw who could either redeem him or deepen his scars. Haunted by a lifetime of violence, Cole finds his rigid sense of justice challenged by Riley’s unyielding hope for a second chance, forcing him to confront the blurred lines between vengeance and mercy. As their uneasy alliance grows, a fragile father-son bond begins to form, offering both men a glimpse of emotional salvation in a world consumed by greed and violence. Yet, as the harsh realities of their environment close in, the tenuous connection they’ve built teeters on the edge, leaving them to grapple with the painful cost of emotional detachment and the elusive nature of forgiveness."

This version was solid but followed a predictable cadence.

GPT-4.5 Version:

Justice or mercy? The choice will change him forever. Cole Mercer hunts outlaws--it's all he's ever known. But when he corners Riley, a young criminal whose optimism defies the violence of the frontier, the bounty hunter's rigid world begins to fracture. A fragile bond forms, something resembling family, but out here, nothing lasts. Is redemption truly possible, or is Cole doomed to repeat the very past he's desperate to escape?

Here, GPT-4.5 immediately grabs attention by starting with sharp, concise questions, instantly drawing readers into the moral complexity faced by the protagonist. This punchy opening sets a more gripping tone, reflecting the rugged spirit of the genre.

2. Historical Romance Story - “Industry & Thread”

Original Version:

"In the heart of the Industrial Revolution, Clara Bennett, a resolute seamstress scarred by a life of hardship, becomes a beacon of hope as she fights for workers' rights against oppressive factory practices. Her unwavering determination is tested when she crosses paths with William Aldridge, a privileged heir grappling with his conscience and the moral cost of his inherited wealth. As their unexpected romance unfolds amidst societal turmoil, Clara and William challenge each other’s beliefs, bridging the divide between their worlds. Together, they discover the profound strength found in love and conviction, igniting a movement that transcends individual struggles to inspire a collective hope for justice and dignity.”

Though descriptive, this version was somewhat conventional and dense.

GPT-4.5 Version:

Love sparked rebellion--but can it survive its own revolution? Clara Bennett never asked to be a hero, yet standing against factory oppression has made her one. William Aldridge, heir to privilege and burdened by his family's legacy, sees in Clara a courage he never imagined. Their love bridges class divides, fueling a movement toward justice. But as passion collides with politics and hearts clash with society, will their bond endure--or break beneath the weight of change?

GPT-4.5 introduces an emotional hook upfront, immediately establishing high stakes. The fluid rhythm and open-ended nature encourage readers to feel emotionally invested from the start, significantly enhancing reader engagement.

3. Military Action/Drama Story - “Ashes”

Original Version:

"Amid the chaos of the Battle of Fallujah, combat medic Marcus Allen makes a fateful decision to defy orders and rescue an injured civilian, sparking a dangerous chain of events in the war-torn streets. Haunted by past failures and torn between duty and conscience, Marcus finds himself at odds with his commanding officer, Sergeant Raymond Daniels, a staunch believer in military protocol. As their clashing principles collide, their relationship evolves from conflict to mutual respect, forcing both to confront the true meaning of sacrifice and humanity. With lives hanging in the balance, Marcus must navigate the brutal realities of war to prove that compassion can triumph even in the darkest moments."

Effective, but structurally familiar and predictable.

GPT-4.5 Version:

Medic. Soldier. Rebel. Hero? Marcus Allen disobeyed orders to save a life--a single choice unleashing chaos in war-torn Fallujah. Now, he's locked in a battle of wills with Sergeant Daniels, whose uncompromising discipline leaves no room for mercy. As tensions escalate and lives hang in the balance, Marcus stands alone. Can compassion survive the brutality of war, or will one act of defiance cost him everything?

GPT-4.5 transforms the original sentence structure entirely, using rapid-fire fragments to create a sense of urgency and immediacy. The tension-filled rhythm propels the reader directly into the heart of the story.

Why GPT-4.5 Matters

The versatility and creativity of GPT-4.5 represent a significant advancement. Unlike earlier models that sometimes produced repetitive or predictable outputs, GPT-4.5 excels at varying sentence structures and rhythms to match genre and audience expectations. This results in more compelling, genre-sensitive, and engaging narratives.

Specifically within Subtxt, where we deliberately separate storytelling from subtext (through our Subtxt Flow and Subtxt Focus approach), a model like GPT-4.5 is particularly valuable. It naturally aligns with Flow’s emphasis on storytelling, providing diverse and vibrant narrative presentations while leaving deeper thematic and subtextual elements intact. This clear delineation ensures GPT-4.5 enhances the storytelling aspect of Subtxt seamlessly.

Moving Forward

While we won’t be immediately rolling out GPT-4.5 across our entire platform, we see clear opportunities to leverage its strengths selectively. Specific Overviews and Storytelling areas within our application can particularly benefit from GPT-4.5’s nuanced style and engaging variety.

Stay tuned as we continue exploring and integrating GPT-4.5’s innovative capabilities to elevate storytelling experiences within our platform.

Uncovering the Source of Conflict: The Form-Field-Facet-Force Approach

Identify conflict through author's intent

When crafting compelling narratives, pinpointing exactly what drives conflict is essential. But how can we truly uncover the heart of tension in a story? Introducing Form, Field, Facet, and Force—a structured yet dynamic way of identifying the source of conflict rather than simply categorizing it.

Moving Beyond Labels

Original Dramatica theory introduced concepts like Domain, Concern, Issue, and Problem to classify conflicts. Although groundbreaking, these labels can sometimes constrain our understanding of a narrative's deeper dynamics. The Form-Field-Facet-Force framework, part of the Universal Narrative Model, emerges organically from the very shape of conflict itself, making structure a tool for discovery rather than mere classification.

Let's explore how this approach unfolds step-by-step.

Step 1: Define the Perspective

Before we dive deeper, we first identify from whose viewpoint the conflict is being understood—not from traditional audience-oriented perspectives like third-person narration, but as intended by the author:

• I: Personal, internal experience of conflict.
• You: Observing conflict externally, interacting directly or indirectly.
• We: Shared experience, exploring tensions within relationships.
• They: Detached observation of conflict from a distance.

This step is crucial because the framework revolves entirely around the artist's intent—what the author wants to convey, even if they are not yet fully aware or able to articulate it.

Step 2: Find the Form

Next, we determine the Form through which the conflict is appreciated. Think of these Forms as the "engines of conflict," actively shaping the source of tension from each perspective:

• External Framing: Static, external conflicts like societal structures, environmental conditions, or rigid external constraints.
• External Processing: Dynamic, external conflicts involving observable actions, ongoing activities, or visible processes.
• Internal Process: Dynamic, internal conflicts involving emotional and psychological evolution, personal growth, or internal decision-making.
• Internal Framing: Static, internal conflicts such as entrenched beliefs, fixed mindsets, or ingrained psychological states.

Collectively, these Forms generate the rich, perceptive depth that makes narratives meaningful.

Step 3: Narrow the Field

After establishing the Form, we narrow down the Field, defining the scale or magnitude of conflict appreciation. Unlike previous steps, here all Perspectives align around one of these Fields, effectively creating a focused "playing field" for conflict:

• Foundational: Deeply rooted conflicts around knowledge, desires, self-awareness, and perception, forming the fundamental landscape of meaning.
• Functional: Conflicts arising from tangible results, operational processes, expectations, and determinations—what is enabled or obstructed through active execution.
• Latent: Hidden conflicts driven by underlying forces such as faith and disbelief, logic, and emotion—subtle motivations and emerging potentials beneath the surface.
• Deliberative: Active conflicts involving strategic thinking, analysis, or decision-making (e.g., political debate or careful consideration).

Focusing on a Field clarifies exactly where the conflict resides within the narrative landscape.

Step 4: Explore a Facet

Drill deeper into the specifics by choosing a Facet—a dimension that exists along a range of possibilities, revealing multiple angles or 'facets' through which the conflict is clearly visible:

• Skill vs. Experience: Conflict between proficiency, training, and mastery versus tension arising from past events, accumulated wisdom, or prior learning.
• Self Interest vs. Altruism: Conflict driven by personal gain, selfish motivations, or self-serving interests against the impulse or necessity to consider others first.
• Sense of Self vs. State of Being: Tension between one's constructed identity, ego, or self-perception and their authentic essence or true nature.

Exploring these facets reveals exactly how and where tension is made manifest.

Step 5: Identify the Force

At the deepest level lies the Force—the genuine driver of narrative imbalance. Unlike earlier stages, this force can't neatly be reduced to a single cause without losing the complexity of the conflict.

Instead, the Force splits into sub-forces, offering various perspectives on the same inequity:

• Problem, Solution, Focus, and Direction
• Condition, Adjustment, Resistance, and Flow

These sub-forces enable us to grasp the elusive nature of conflict without oversimplification.

Why Stop Here?

Attempting further reduction risks losing sight of the original Form—the initial shape and essence of conflict—as we dive deeper into excessive detail. To truly assess the source of conflict and inequity that propels a narrative forward, we need a balanced appreciation: clear enough to approximate the Force closely, yet broad enough to maintain our understanding of the original Form.

A Fresh Take on Structural Categories

Instead of simply categorizing conflict through seemingly separate labels, this approach towards finding the source of conflict encourages deeper questions:

• From what perspective is the conflict observed? (Perspective)
• How is it shaped? (Form)
• What is its breadth? (Field)
• Where does it manifest? (Facet)
• What ultimately drives this imbalance? (Force)

Following this layered approach leads us beyond mere classification to a profound understanding of narrative conflicts, enriching storytelling for both AI-driven narrative generation and human-authored narratives alike.

By embracing the Form-Field-Facet-Force framework, you empower your storytelling—capturing the essence of conflict clearly, richly, and authentically. This method not only reveals deeper narrative truths but also unlocks your full potential to craft stories that resonate profoundly with your audience.

Understanding the Independence of Throughlines in Story Structure

one inequity, four perspectives, zero cause-and-effect

Some story structure questions take you deep into the heart of what makes a narrative work. And when you get those lightbulb moments—where a single concept unlocks a whole new level of understanding—well, that’s the good stuff.

A recent discussion with a writer about Subtxt’s Muse led to exactly this kind of breakthrough. The question:

How do different Throughlines interact with the same inequity in a story?

It’s a great question, and the answer reveals something fundamental about how stories function at a structural level.

The One Inequity That Shapes It All

At its core, every story is an exploration of a single inequity—just appreciated from different perspectives. The entire model of narrative is built on this concept.

• The Objective Story (OS) Issue is one way of looking at the inequity.
• The Pivotal Elements (defining the Main Character and Obstacle Character’s stakes) are another way.
• The inequity is present throughout the whole framework—each part of the Storyform is just a different lens on it.

It’s easy to see the inequity in the space between the Main Character (MC) and Obstacle Character (OC), since their perspectives are in direct opposition. But that tension isn’t the cause of the inequity—it’s just the most personal manifestation of it. The OS Issue, on the other hand, reveals how the inequity plays out for everyone in the story. It’s not separate from the central conflict—it’s just a different way of appreciating the same problem.

This is why the death of a Main Character or Obstacle Character doesn’t automatically "solve" the story’s problem. They aren’t causing the inequity; they’re personifications of it at the character level. What matters is whether the narrative itself resolves the inequity—or leaves it unresolved.

No Throughline Causes Another to Change

One of the biggest misconceptions about story structure is the idea that one Throughline directly affects or alters another. That’s not how stories function structurally.

• The Objective Story Throughline is just that—objective. It doesn’t shift based on personal character growth.
• The Main Character Throughline follows the MC’s internal journey from Problem to Solution (or lack thereof).
• The Relationship Story Throughline evolves as (typically) the MC and OC interact through a meaningful relationship.

Each of these Throughlines exists independently, even though they are all different ways of exploring the same central inequity.

The Key Takeaway

• A Relinquished Main Character shifts from Problem to Solution in their Main Character Throughline.
• The Maintained Obstacle Character stays steadfast in their OC Throughline (or vice versa).
• The Objective Story Throughline describes the roles characters play in the story’s broader conflict—it doesn’t track personal transformation.

A Clear Example: First Blood

A great example of this independence in action is John Rambo in First Blood.

• As the Main Character, Rambo undergoes a shift from Proaction to Reaction—his biggest issue is the lack of Proaction on the point of those who could see that Vietnam veterans were hurting. By the end of the story, he relinquishes that problem with Proaction.
• However, in the Objective Story, his role remains Reaction the entire time. No matter what personal changes he undergoes, the way he functions in the larger narrative framework remains constant from beginning to end.

And yet, First Blood still stands as an all-time classic in the action movie hall of fame. That’s because the Objective Story isn’t tracking his personal transformation—it’s tracking the broader conflict of the film. His shift as a Main Character doesn’t alter his role in the larger story structure, yet it does give us something to hold onto emotionally.

No Throughline Causes Another to Change

So even if it seems like a Relinquished MC suddenly adopts the OS counterpart’s perspective, that’s an apparent similarity, not an actual structural shift. The Change happens in the Main Character Throughline, not in the OS.

Each Throughline offers a unique way of appreciating the same core inequity, but they remain structurally independent.

And once you see this, you’ll never look at story structure the same way again.

Want to explore this concept further? Muse in Subtxt is here to help guide you through your narrative with intelligent, story-savvy insights. And if you find yourself diving deeper than you ever expected—well, you’re in good company.

Exploring “Didi” Through Subtxt: A Thematic Breakdown with Muse

There’s something magical about seeing a story’s thematic core come to life—not just through its characters and plot, but through the deeper psychological and emotional undercurrents that shape it. That’s exactly what happened when we uploaded a thematic analysis of Didi into Subtxt and let Muse do its thing.

And let me tell you: it was a revelation.

A New Way to Approach Story Analysis

One of the most exciting parts of using Muse is how it lets you start with a Storyform before diving into a discussion about the film itself. Instead of reverse-engineering themes from a finished script, you can generate the Storyform first and then watch as Muse constructs a detailed, insightful analysis—one that perfectly aligns with the film’s narrative and thematic elements.

That’s exactly what happened with Didi.

(And if you haven’t seen the film yet—written and directed by Sean Wang, a Sundance favorite from 2024—we highly recommend you do. It’s a heartfelt, hilarious, and deeply resonant coming-of-age story that absolutely deserves your time.)

Step 1: Generating the Storyform

It all started with a simple request:

"Was thinking of putting up the Storyform for Didi, can you show me what it would like: relinquished, be-er, dopamine, decision, success good, os concern becoming, mc pivotal Avoid"

Of course, we had a bit of an upper-hand knowing what Aspects were being explored in the subtext of the story (all those terms listed at the end of our request), which you can learn more about through Subtxt...

But the important part is what Muse came back with.

Muse processed the input and built a complete Storyform for the film, aligning it with the following narrative choices:

• Main Character Resolve: Relinquished
• MC Pivotal Element: Avoid
• Narrative Alignment: Dopamine
• Story Driver: Decision
• Story Outcome: Success
• Story Judgment: Good
• OS Concern: Becoming

At first, it misplaced a key element (putting the MC in Environmental rather than Attitudinal, as it should for a Be-er), but a quick adjustment fixed it. Once locked in, Muse saved the Storyform to the story and carried over the current conversation into the analysis—keeping everything organized and accessible.

Step 2: Letting Muse Construct the Four Throughlines

Here’s where things got really interesting.

With just the Storyform in place, Muse generated a detailed thematic breakdown of Didi—without even knowing what the film was about! Simply by following the narrative structure, it perfectly described the core struggles and themes of the movie, from adolescent identity crises to shifting friendships to family pressures.

Here’s what Muse generated, aligning each Throughline with the film’s thematic DNA:

Muse

Sure thing! Let’s flesh out the four Throughline Perspectives for "Didi" while keeping it aligned with the updated Storyform. Here's what I imagine based on the dynamics and themes you've shared:

Objective Story (OS) Throughline: Cognitive Processing — Becoming

The Objective Story focuses on the challenges of adolescence and the mental adjustments required to transition from one phase of identity to another. This is a story about navigating self-image, academic expectations, and the subtle (yet seismic) shifts in how the world perceives you. It’s about becoming someone new—whether that’s the person you want to be, or the person others expect you to be. The collective struggle here is learning how to adapt, as everyone from parents to teachers to students wrestles with the conceptualization of growth and maturity.

Main Character (MC) Throughline: Attitudinal Framing — Subconscious

Chris struggles with deeply rooted feelings of inadequacy and self-doubt, stemming from a need to avoid failure at all costs. Chris is the kind of person who internalizes everything—replaying moments in their head, questioning their choices, and agonizing over their instincts. The drive to avoid emotional discomfort and maintain a sense of self-worth constantly collides with the raw, unfiltered feelings of adolescence. Chris must confront and pursue clarity about who they are, despite their aversion to emotional vulnerability.

Obstacle Character (OC) Throughline: Environmental Framing — Future

Chris's mom represents the weight of expectations and the lingering sense of a predetermined path. From her perspective, the future is something to plan for and secure, and she views Chris’s struggles as obstacles to overcome rather than experiences to embrace. This creates a push-pull dynamic where she reinforces Chris's avoidance tendencies while also challenging them to reconsider their emotional framing. Her unwavering belief in considering the future keeps her in sharp contrast with Chris’s tendency to recoil from emotional clarity.

Relationship Story (RS) Throughline: Physical Processing — Obtaining

Here’s where the magic of friendship groups comes into play, much like Inside Out 2. The relationship story centers on Chris’s evolving connections with their friend groups, moving from middle school into high school. It’s about obtaining a sense of belonging and connection, but also about the friction between self-interest and altruism within these groups. Do you cling to old friendships out of loyalty, or let them go to make space for new ones? The physical reality of doing things together—hanging out, studying, sharing experiences—becomes the tangible manifestation of the deeper emotional shifts happening beneath the surface.

This structure offers plenty of room to explore identity, emotional growth, and relationships in a layered, dynamic way. It aligns beautifully with the Storyform’s focus on Dopamine-driven motivation and the Main Character’s journey of relinquishing avoidance in favor of emotional clarity.

Let me know if this feels right or if you’d like to tweak anything before locking it in! 😊

The Unexpected Surprise: Muse’s Ability to Adapt

What made this analysis even more impressive was how adaptable Muse was. After the initial analysis, when more details about Didi’s actual plot were added, Muse went back and refined everything, integrating specific events from the film into the thematic framework.

Muse wasn’t just parroting back the Storyform—it was using it as a foundation to explore the film’s meaning in a deep and insightful way.

Unlocking New Ways to Use Subtxt

This process opened up an entirely new way to engage with stories in Subtxt:

✅ Start with the Storyform, then explore your story’s thematic layers.
✅ Let Muse generate a detailed analysis before you even write the script.
✅ Compare multiple Storyforms side by side to explore different interpretations.
✅ Use Muse as a story coach, refining your themes and structure with each iteration.

And if Didi is any indication, this is just the beginning.

Imagine what’s possible for your own stories when you let Muse do the heavy lifting—revealing not just what your story is about, but what it truly means.

So, what will you learn about storytelling next? 🎬✨

Exploring Story Possibilities with Subtxt and Muse

Effortless storytelling exploration through theme and genre.

Ever feel like your story ideas get stuck in a loop? You start with an intriguing premise, but as you flesh it out, the plot feels… familiar. Maybe your Main Character’s internal struggle echoes every other hero’s journey you’ve seen before. Or the dynamic between your Relationship Characters feels predictable, like a well-rehearsed sitcom.

This is where Subtxt and Muse come in, making it easier than ever to shake things up. With the power of Illustrations and Muse’s ability to generate multiple thematic variations on the fly, you can quickly explore fresh storytelling possibilities—without losing the essence of your narrative.

The Playground, Now Supercharged

In the past, writers used the Playground technique in Dramatica theory to generate different iterations of their story by shifting thematic elements and character dynamics. The idea was simple: tweak one element—like the Main Character’s problem or the way the Relationship Story unfolds—and suddenly, you’re looking at an entirely new version of your narrative.

Now, with Subtxt and Muse, this process is not just possible—it’s effortless. You don’t have to manually brainstorm variations or get lost in endless rewrites. Just ask Muse.

Want to explore different versions of your Main Character’s Problem of Test? Instead of wrestling with abstract concepts, you can prompt Muse directly:

“Give me seven different versions of my Main Character’s Problem of Test.”

In seconds, you’ll have multiple thematic angles to consider. Maybe your character struggles with proving their worth, or perhaps they’re testing the limits of their own morality. Each version gives you a new perspective, helping you refine your character in ways you hadn’t considered.

Rapid-Fire Genre Exploration

The beauty of Subtxt and Muse isn’t just in generating different versions of the same theme—it’s in how quickly you can test those ideas in completely different genres.

Let’s say your Relationship Story Issue is Rationalization. You might be used to seeing this play out in one kind of story—say, a crime thriller where two partners justify bending the law. But what if you want to explore something wildly different?

Just ask Muse:

“Give me five totally different ways to illustrate an RS Issue of Rationalization, each in a different genre.”

And suddenly, your options explode.

• Sci-Fi: A sentient AI and its creator grow closer as they collaborate to justify memory tweaks, blurring the line between ethical boundaries and mutual dependency.
• Romantic Comedy: A couple strengthens their bond as they laugh and support each other while convincing themselves that their little white lies are just part of love—until the truth tests that foundation.
• Fantasy: A wizard and their apprentice develop a deep mentor-student trust as they rationalize bending magical laws, each reinforcing the other’s belief in their shared cause.
• Historical Drama: Two revolutionaries bond over their shared justification that betrayal is a necessary evil, their mutual understanding deepening as the stakes rise.
• Horror: A group of survivors grows increasingly united as they collectively rationalize leaving someone behind, their shared guilt creating an unspoken but powerful connection—until the cracks in their reasoning appear.

These aren’t just random plot ideas. They’re grounded in the thematic essence of Rationalization and they’re about the relationship--not an “argument” over rationalizing--which is key when it comes to exploring the Relationship Story Throughline.

With Muse, you can quickly iterate and see how the same story dynamic can take on completely different flavors depending on the setting and genre.

No More Staring at a Blank Page

The biggest hurdle in writing isn’t a lack of creativity—it’s getting stuck in the same patterns. Subtxt and Muse make it easy to break free from those limitations by giving you structured ways to explore new ideas while staying true to your story’s core.

So, next time you feel like your story is treading familiar ground, don’t just tweak a scene here and there. Ask Muse for a completely new take—whether it’s a fresh Illustration of your theme or a whole new genre twist. The possibilities are endless, and they’re all just a question away.

Ready to see where your story can go? Fire up Subtxt, start experimenting with Muse, and watch your narrative possibilities expand.

Introducing Subtxt Flow & Focus: A New Era of Story Development

Proof positive that purpose counts

The future of storytelling just got a major upgrade.

We’ve been eagerly awaiting this moment for months, and now it’s finally here: Subtxt Flow and Subtxt Focus—two distinct storytelling modes that bring unprecedented depth and flexibility to narrative development.

Thanks to OpenAI’s latest o3-mini release, Subtxt Focus now allows you to refine and deepen your narrative structure like never before, leveraging groundbreaking advances in reasoning and contextual awareness—all within Muse.

And the results? Nothing short of astonishing.

The Power of Subtxt Focus

In just the past few days since its release, we’ve seen Subtxt Focus do things we never thought possible. I recently had a 60-page conversation with the storyform for Anora, bouncing ideas back and forth (using it as inspiration and a jumping-off point). It kept track of every storybeat, every thematic nuance, every throughline connection—all while giving me the freedom to be as creative as I wanted.

This isn’t just a chatbot throwing ideas at you. This is a dynamic, interactive, and intelligent narrative assistant that understands the structure of storytelling—helping you weave together storybeats, refine themes, and explore characters in ways that feel completely organic.

For the first time ever, you can now build an entire storyform—organically, conversationally, and holistically—right inside Muse.

Introducing the Subtxt Model Selector

With Subtxt Flow & Focus, we’ve introduced a powerful new feature inside Muse:

🔄 The Model Selector—allowing you to seamlessly switch between two distinct modes of storytelling:

🌀 Flow Mode (Creative Brainstorming) – This is the Muse you know and love, optimized for creative ideation, rapid iteration, and engaging writing. Perfect for exploring story ideas, pushing creative boundaries, and diving deep into character and world-building.

🎯 Focus Mode (Precision Storyforming) – Need to nail down your storyform? Want to check the consistency of all related thematic elements? Focus mode is built for that. It helps you align narrative structure, refine storybeats, and ensure everything fits together perfectly.

For Subtxt Pro and Subtxt Infinite subscribers, the Model Selector at the bottom of the Muse chat box allows you to manually switch between these two modes. Choose Flow when you need inspiration, then switch to Focus when it’s time to refine and structure.

(Basic subscribers will find automatic Focus checks sprinkled in for consistency)

And here’s the real game-changer:

Focus mode’s context window is 6-8x bigger than what we’ve had before. That means you can have much longer conversations, receive incredibly detailed responses, and even get an entire screenplay’s worth of story sequences woven together—all in one response.

To Celebrate, We’re Updating Our Pricing

To make Subtxt Flow & Focus accessible to as many writers as possible, we’re adjusting our pricing:

✅ Subtxt Basic is now $20/month (down from $25) or $200/year (down from $250). This is your Flow-centric subscription—perfect for rapid creative development and theory-driven storytelling.

✅ Subtxt Pro is now $55/month (up from $45) or $550/year—reflecting increased server usage as more professional writers and serious storytellers push the limits of Subtxt.

🚀 Special Offer for February!

If you sign up for Subtxt Pro’s annual plan this month, you can lock it in for just $450 for the entire year—a $100 discount as a thank-you to all our supporters.

💡 And if you’re already a subscriber? Your current rate is locked in. If you’ve been with us since 2017, you’re grandfathered in at your original pricing—just another way we show appreciation for your loyalty.

See It in Action – Live Demo This Wednesday

Want to see Subtxt Flow & Focus in action? I’ll be hosting a live demo this Wednesday at 2PM Pacific, walking through exactly how these new tools work and how you can use them to craft better stories.

(Details on how to join will be in a follow-up email.)

This is the moment we’ve been waiting for—a storytelling assistant that understands narrative structure, supports your creative freedom, and helps you build stories better, faster, and more intuitively than ever before.

We can’t wait for you to experience it.

Oh! And here's that 60-page PDF Conversation with Muse!